INVISIBLE INK
There was a beautiful world of animals. Where many animals lived, some poor and some rich. Similarly there were a rabbit 🐇 named Bunny was living with her family. His father was a poor farmer, He was hardly able to earn for livelihooh. He used to another work for the education of Bunny. Bunny was not good in study. His ultimate dream was to clear his examination. In order to pursue his dream, Bunny choose wrong track. He stole a invisible pen from his friend. He was capable to clear that exam by putting some efforts but he didn't want to put. He used that pen in his exam and the climax was that, he became the topper of the college. Whole media, teachers were there to congratulate him. But when media start questioning he was even unable to speak. They were there must be hesitation but reality was that, he was unknown about all those questions. They were asking again and but he didn't speak. At last he reveals the secret that he clear that exam with the help of invisible pen. And that's the time when he lost his reputation as well as get risticated from the college. Then he realised that cheating or giving up is not an option he need to put efforts in order to achieve any goal.
The story is great especially the exposition and climax but the resolution could have been improved. In the whole you are a great writer.
ReplyDeleteYou wrote a nice outline. I find some grammar, punctuation and pronoun error. The flow of the story is missing. Work on it. Otherwise you are a great writer. You have the potential.
ReplyDeleteGood job!